What types of descriptive language strengthen therevision?
strong verbs and precise adjectives
strong verbs and hyperbole
simile and precise adjectives
simile and hyperbole

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Answer 1
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strong verb and hyperbole

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lesson 4 unit 3 chance and choice

Answer 2
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hyperbole and figurative language

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First Draft:  Last week, I won two tickets to see the hottest band in the country perform. I will never forget the anticipation I felt waiting to find out if I was the lucky caller. The only problem was that I would have to choose who to go with me: Jackie or Sharon.

Revision: Last week, I won two tickets to see the hottest band in the country perform. I was on pins and needles as I hung on the line, dying to see if I was the lucky caller. The only problem was that I would be forced to make a choice between my two best friends. Should I invite Jackie or Sharon?

As you can see the revision uses hyperboles and figurative language so it makes it harder to make a choice.


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give him brainiest

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