ENGLISH HIGH SCHOOL

Opinions on my essay? i can message you the prompt and speech if needed, but i really just want opinions instead of corrections or proof-reading.
much appreciated.
opinions on my essay? i can message you the prompt - 1

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Answer 1
Answer:
The second sentence is a bit disjointed and run on.
What tense is this supposed to be in?
Florence is not alive so why did you say a woman who agrees with this instead of agreed?
Great word choice!
Where is the conclusion?

Overall, I love the word choice and quotations, you could just fix a few minor details. If you need me to look over it again when you finish just pm me. Good luck!

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The best replacement for the underlined word is argue. This is because when a critic tells an opinion, the he or she is arguing or opposing to what common people will notice.

Answer:

A. argue

Explanation:

 The best replacement for the word say in the sentence is argue because that means that the opinion or idea is presented with a reason, which is stated in the line 'without any organization, the abundance of information available could be overwhelming and therefore stifle creativity.'

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Answer:

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Explanation:

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In the given question, the indefinite pronoun employed is 'somebody' as it doesn't indicate a particular person it is defining or referring to. 'He' knew that 'somebody' arrived late but do not know who. Thus, option A is the correct answer.
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Answer:

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Answer:

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